last summer, i embarked on a journey to england, a country steeped in history and culture. the first stop was london, the bustling capital city. the iconic big ben towering over the houses of parliament, the majestic tower bridge spanning the river thames, and the ever-so-mysterious british museum were all breathtaking sights. each brick and every statue whispered tales of centuries past.
next, i ventured to oxford, a city of dreaming spires. the university of oxford, with its ancient colleges and libraries, instilled a sense of awe. i wandered through the hushed halls of the bodleian library, imagining the scholars who had walked those same floors.
then, i travelled to the countryside, where the rolling hills of the cotswolds and the tranquility of the lake district stole my heart. the fresh air, the lush greenery, and the gentle sound of water flowing in the lakes were a stark contrast to the hustle and bustle of the cities. it was here that i truly felt the essence of english countryside life.
lastly, i visited stonehenge, a prehistoric wonder that still puzzles archaeologists today. standing amidst those giant stones, i couldn't help but marvel at the ingenuity of our ancestors.
this trip to england wasn't just about sightseeing; it was a journey through time, a plunge into the depths of history, and an immersion in a culture vastly different from mine. it taught me that despite geographical distances, we are all connected by a shared human history.
every place i visited left an indelible mark on me. england, with its blend of modernity and tradition, has become a cherished memory that i will forever hold dear.
老師評語：
這篇游記作文生動描繪了作者在英國的旅行經(jīng)歷，語言流暢，描述細(xì)膩，尤其在描繪各地景物時，既展示了英國的歷史文化底蘊，又體現(xiàn)了作者對旅行的獨特感悟。作文結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，起承轉(zhuǎn)合自然，展現(xiàn)出良好的敘事技巧。但要注意，對于具體歷史事件或人物的描述可以更深入，以增加作文的豐富性和深度?？傮w而言，這是一篇優(yōu)秀的游記作品。
